When I write a character, I like to have them a little vague. This doesn't necessarily mean that they're all mysterious. In fact, one of the most vague characters in A Pius Man, is the most blunt, and the most straightforward, and the person who's seemingly the most willing to tell you exactly what's on his mind.
Sean A.P. Ryan: mercenary,self-described cleanser of the gene pool, and he lists his resume in terms of property damage and body counts.
While blunt, Ryan doesn't necessarily have to be evil. After all, you have comic book characters like Wolverine who slash hordes to pieces all the time, and his kill count is probably somewhere in the thousands by now ... assuming he doesn't get rebooted into being a hippy....
But I digress.
However, in the case of Sean Ryan, he's working for the Vatican ... he's supposed to be training priests and nuns in nonlethal combat. His third scene in the novel has Sean crippling an opponent -- not many people recover well from a shattered kneecap.
And people wonder why I make the Pope a suspect in A Pius Man ... if he's hired this lunatic, almost nothing could be put past him.
But, do you necessarily need violence for a good, intimidating character? Heck no. All you need is the implication that there will be very, very, very bad things that happen if someone crosses him/her.
Frankly, all you need is a reputation.
For example, take a clip from the tv show Doctor Who -- a series about a time traveling alien (there's a reason why there are Romans and spaceships in the same scene) ....
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This is someone who has a reputation and is not afraid to use it.
Another good example is in Rebekah Hendershot's Masks -- in Chapter 8 of her serialized novel, she covers the history of a superhero known as "The Black Mask," detailing one incident where a section of The Crips tangled with the superhero, and were slowly and painfully broken to pieces, and ground into the dust.
The only thing left of them is their gang tag left on the wall of the Black Masks hideout.
It's efficient, establishes a reputation, and leaves no question about what happens when he's trifled with.
Over all, quite fun. You should try the novel, it's fun.
Sean A.P. Ryan: mercenary,self-described cleanser of the gene pool, and he lists his resume in terms of property damage and body counts.
While blunt, Ryan doesn't necessarily have to be evil. After all, you have comic book characters like Wolverine who slash hordes to pieces all the time, and his kill count is probably somewhere in the thousands by now ... assuming he doesn't get rebooted into being a hippy....
But I digress.
However, in the case of Sean Ryan, he's working for the Vatican ... he's supposed to be training priests and nuns in nonlethal combat. His third scene in the novel has Sean crippling an opponent -- not many people recover well from a shattered kneecap.
And people wonder why I make the Pope a suspect in A Pius Man ... if he's hired this lunatic, almost nothing could be put past him.
But, do you necessarily need violence for a good, intimidating character? Heck no. All you need is the implication that there will be very, very, very bad things that happen if someone crosses him/her.
Frankly, all you need is a reputation.
For example, take a clip from the tv show Doctor Who -- a series about a time traveling alien (there's a reason why there are Romans and spaceships in the same scene) ....
[more below the break]
This is someone who has a reputation and is not afraid to use it.
Another good example is in Rebekah Hendershot's Masks -- in Chapter 8 of her serialized novel, she covers the history of a superhero known as "The Black Mask," detailing one incident where a section of The Crips tangled with the superhero, and were slowly and painfully broken to pieces, and ground into the dust.
The only thing left of them is their gang tag left on the wall of the Black Masks hideout.
It's efficient, establishes a reputation, and leaves no question about what happens when he's trifled with.
Over all, quite fun. You should try the novel, it's fun.
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